The learner can write a formal report with a clear structure, analysed findings and justified recommendations.
What is it for?
Learn to present findings, interpret evidence and recommend practical action in a formal report.
What you need to know
- A title and terms of reference that define the report's purpose and scope.
- Findings organised under headings, with relevant facts and figures.
- Analysis that explains patterns, possible causes and limits in the evidence.
- Objective language that uses nominalisation, passive forms and careful hedging.
- Ranked recommendations supported by findings, followed by a concise conclusion.
1. Give the report a clear structure
A formal report helps readers make decisions from evidence.
Use a title, terms of reference, findings, analysis, recommendations and a conclusion.
Each section has one clear job, so readers can find information quickly.
Terms of reference explain why the report was prepared and what it covers.
- Write a specific title that names the subject.
- State the purpose and scope in the opening section.
- Use numbered headings when the report contains several sections.
- Keep findings separate from your interpretation and proposed actions.
2. Report facts without personal bias
A report should sound fair, measured and professional.
Avoid personal reactions such as 'I loved the new schedule'.
Use passive forms when the action matters more than the person.
Use nominalisation to present actions as clear topics for discussion.
Hedging shows caution when the evidence does not prove a firm conclusion.
- Replace personal opinions with evidence-based statements.
- Use 'was recorded' or 'were identified' when the actor is unimportant.
- Use nouns such as 'a reduction', 'an increase' and 'an improvement'.
- Use 'appears to', 'may indicate' and 'is likely to' when certainty is limited.
- Do not make a claim stronger than the available evidence.
3. Describe and interpret the evidence
Findings show what the evidence says, not what you think about it.
Analysis explains why the findings matter and what they might mean.
Compare figures, identify patterns and note important differences.
Mention limits when the sample is small or the information is incomplete.
Do not treat a link between two things as proof of cause.
- Give the source, period or sample size when relevant.
- Report exact figures before interpreting them.
- Compare the strongest patterns rather than listing every number.
- Use cautious language when several explanations remain possible.
- Explain how each finding relates to the report's purpose.
4. Recommend actions and justify their order
Recommendations should follow directly from the findings.
Rank them by likely benefit, cost, urgency and ease of delivery.
Explain why the first action matters more than the others.
Name a practical next step when the evidence supports one.
The conclusion should summarise the main result, not repeat every detail.
- Use 'It is recommended that' for a formal proposal.
- Use 'should be prioritised' to show which action comes first.
- Explain the expected benefit and any important limitation.
- Avoid promises that the evidence cannot support.
- End with a brief judgement based on the full report.
5. Use headings and precise linking
Headings help busy readers move directly to the information they need.
Use short, informative headings rather than vague labels.
Link evidence to interpretation with phrases such as 'This suggests that'.
Use contrast phrases when results differ, and qualifying phrases when evidence is limited.
Keep tables and figures close to the text that explains them.
- Use consistent heading styles throughout the report.
- Give tables clear titles and label their figures.
- Use 'by contrast' to compare different results.
- Use 'to a limited extent' when a finding has restricted support.
- Never include a personal opinion without relevant evidence.
How to do it, step by step
- Choose a title, then define the report's purpose and scope.
- Present the findings under clear headings, using relevant facts and figures.
- Analyse the evidence, explain patterns and acknowledge uncertainty.
- Rank practical recommendations and justify each with a finding.
- Write a concise conclusion and check the layout, evidence and tone.
Formulas and key language
| Use it for | Example | Another example |
|---|---|---|
| The purpose of this report is to examine + noun | The purpose of this report is to examine staff break arrangements. | The purpose of this report is to assess the current booking system. |
| The findings indicate that + clause | The findings indicate that most staff prefer flexible hours. | The findings indicate that delays occur mainly after lunch. |
| A total of + number + noun + were recorded | A total of 24 complaints were recorded in June. | A total of 68 responses were received during the survey. |
| There was a + noun + in + noun | There was a noticeable reduction in booking errors. | There was a moderate increase in afternoon demand. |
| This may suggest that + clause | This may suggest that staff need clearer instructions. | This may suggest that the current timetable is unsuitable. |
| The evidence appears to support + noun | The evidence appears to support a trial of flexible breaks. | The evidence appears to support a shorter booking form. |
| It is recommended that + subject + base verb | It is recommended that the team review the timetable. | It is recommended that management introduce a short staff survey. |
| Priority should be given to + noun or -ing form | Priority should be given to reducing morning delays. | Priority should be given to training new reception staff. |
| This option is preferable because + clause | This option is preferable because it requires less equipment. | This option is preferable because it addresses the main complaint. |
| Overall, the evidence suggests that + clause | Overall, the evidence suggests that flexible breaks merit further testing. | Overall, the evidence suggests that clearer signs could reduce confusion. |
Model text
Common mistakes
Plan it, then check it
Plan
- Write one sentence explaining the report's purpose and scope.
- Select the strongest figures and organise them under clear headings.
- Identify patterns, possible explanations and limits in the evidence.
- Rank two or three actions and connect each action to a finding.
Check
- Does every section have a clear purpose?
- Are findings supported by facts or figures?
- Does the analysis explain the meaning and limits of the evidence?
- Are recommendations ranked and justified?
- Is the language formal, objective and consistent?
Practice
Choose the sentence that best suits a formal analytical report.
Match each report section with the information it should contain.
Write one suitable word or phrase in each gap.
Correct the one small mistake in each sentence.
Now write
Write a formal analytical report of 170-220 words for the manager of a fictional community library. Use the survey data below. Your report must have a title, terms of reference, findings, analysis, recommendations and a conclusion. Explain what the figures suggest, but do not claim more than they prove. Rank at least two recommendations and justify their order. Use headings and objective language. Survey data from 60 fictional visitors: 36 want longer evening opening hours; 30 report that weekend seats are often unavailable; 24 request more study tables; 18 say that signs are unclear; 42 visit at least twice each week. The survey did not ask visitors about staffing costs or the reasons for their choices. Do not invent extra survey results. You may suggest what the library should measure during a trial.
Word bank
Sentence starters
- The purpose of this report is to...
- Of the 60 visitors surveyed,...
- The findings suggest that...
- One possible explanation is that...
- It is recommended that...
- Overall, the available evidence...