Choose an opening phrase, use statement word order, and add the correct punctuation.
What is it for?
Learn to ask for information politely in emails and other written messages.
What you need to know
- Choose an opening phrase that matches the situation and level of formality.
- Keep statement word order after the opening phrase.
- Use if or whether when asking about a yes-or-no answer.
- Use question words such as where, what, why and when.
- Choose punctuation based on the complete sentence, not the hidden question.
- Use indirect questions to sound polite in formal emails.
1. Change the question, not the meaning
Indirect questions ask for information in a more polite way. They are useful in emails to schools, shops and offices.
Start with a polite phrase. Then keep the original question's meaning, but change its word order.
- A direct question uses question word order.
- An indirect question uses statement word order after its opening phrase.
- The opening phrase can make a request sound less direct.
2. Keep statement word order
After the opening phrase, use the same word order as a normal statement.
Do not add do, does or did to the indirect part. Do not put the subject after the verb.
- Write where the office is, not where is the office.
- Write when the course starts, not when does the course start.
- Keep the main verb in the correct tense.
3. Use if or whether for yes-or-no answers
Some questions need a yes-or-no answer. Use if or whether after the opening phrase.
Both words are often correct. Whether is common in formal writing, especially when asking about choices or possibilities.
- Use if or whether before a subject and verb.
- Do not use if or whether with a question word such as where.
- Choose whether for a slightly more formal tone when it fits.
4. Choose the opening phrase and punctuation
Choose an opening phrase that fits your purpose. Some phrases ask directly for help, while others introduce a request for information.
A question mark belongs after a complete question. A statement that contains an indirect question usually ends with a full stop.
- Could you tell me ...? makes a polite request.
- Do you know ...? asks someone for information.
- I wonder if ... introduces a statement, so use a full stop.
- I would like to know ... is useful in formal emails.
- I am writing to ask whether ... is suitable for formal enquiries.
5. Make formal emails clear and polite
Indirect questions help you sound respectful when writing to someone you do not know.
Group related questions together. Ask about courses, prices or dates in a clear order. Avoid repeating the same opening phrase in every sentence.
- Begin with a short reason for writing.
- Ask about the main topic first.
- Use a new sentence for each separate request.
- End by thanking the reader and requesting a reply.
How to do it, step by step
- Start with a greeting and a short reason for writing.
- Ask about the main course or service using an indirect question.
- Ask about prices, dates and other details in separate sentences.
- Request any extra information you need.
- Thank the reader and finish with a suitable closing.
Formulas and key language
| Use it for | Example | Another example |
|---|---|---|
| Could you tell me + question word + subject + verb? | Could you tell me where the school is? | Could you tell me when registration opens? |
| Do you know + if/whether + subject + verb? | Do you know whether the fee includes books? | Do you know if classes start in January? |
| I wonder if/whether + subject + verb. | I wonder if the library opens on Saturdays. | I wonder whether online lessons are available. |
| I would like to know + question word + subject + verb. | I would like to know why the price changed. | I would like to know how the test works. |
| I am writing to ask whether + subject + verb. | I am writing to ask whether places are available. | I am writing to ask whether the course includes materials. |
| Could you explain + question word + subject + verb? | Could you explain how the payment system works? | Could you explain when the course finishes? |
| I would appreciate it if you could + base verb. | I would appreciate it if you could send the timetable. | I would appreciate it if you could confirm the start date. |
| Please let me know + if/whether + subject + verb. | Please let me know whether the fee can be paid monthly. | Please let me know if places are still available. |
Model text
Common mistakes
Plan it, then check it
Plan
- Write down the information you need from the reader.
- Group your questions by topic, such as prices and dates.
- Choose a suitable opening phrase for each question.
- Arrange the questions in a clear order.
- Add a greeting, a polite closing and your name.
Check
- Check that every indirect question has statement word order.
- Remove do, does or did from the indirect part.
- Check whether if or whether introduces each yes-or-no question.
- Check question marks and full stops carefully.
- Remove repeated questions and keep the email polite.
Practice
Choose the sentence with correct word order and punctuation.
Put the words in the correct order. Add the correct punctuation.
Write if, whether, where or what in each gap.
Change only the part that contains the mistake.
Now write
Write a formal email of 110-140 words to a language school. Use the fictional name Alex Morgan. You want to join an English course next term. Ask about available levels, course prices and start dates. Also ask about class times, books and payment options. Use only indirect questions. Begin with a greeting and explain why you are writing. Group related questions together. Finish by thanking the reader and requesting a reply. Use made-up details only.
Word bank
Sentence starters
- I am writing to ask whether ...
- Could you tell me when ...
- I would like to know what ...
- I wonder if ...
- Could you explain how ...
- I would appreciate it if you could ...