Say the same thing with new words AND a new shape, and keep every fact.
What is it?
To paraphrase is to say the same thing in different words. The meaning stays the same. The words change, and so does the shape of the sentence.
For example: Tom works to live. β Tom lives to work.
Wait⦠no. That was a joke! Same words, new order, but now Tom is a completely different man. Poor Tom.
A paraphrase must keep the meaning. Here is a real one: Correct:
Tom works to live. β Tom has a job so that he can pay his bills.
See it first
- Many students find it difficult to learn a new language. β Learning a new language is not easy for lots of students.
- Prices rose quickly last year. β There was a rapid rise in prices last year.
- The graph shows the number of visitors to a museum from 2010 to 2020. β The line graph illustrates how many people visited a museum between 2010 and 2020.
Same ideas. Look at the first pair: only "new language" stayed. Everything else changed.
Why does it matter?
- In exams (IELTS, Cambridge, TOEFL), you cannot copy the question. If you copy it, those words do not count. You must say it again in your own words.
- In speaking, you often forget a word. A paraphrase saves you: "the machine that keeps food cold" instead of "fridge".
- Your English looks richer when you can say one idea in two or three ways.
What is the problem for learners?
Most learners change one word and think they are finished: difficult β hard. That is not enough. The sentence has the same shape, and the exam sees it as copied.
The second problem: words that look similar are often NOT the same. "Stressful" and "overwhelming" are not equal, and an examiner will notice.
The 3 steps
Find the key words and keep them.
Read the sentence until you understand it. Underline the words you cannot easily replace: names, places, numbers, dates and technical words. Do not change these.
Replace what you can.
Use the toolbox below. But don't replace EVERYTHING:
Wrong: I ingest cocoa-based confectionery on a daily basis. (Nobody talks like this. Please stop. )
Correct: Chocolate is part of my daily routine.
Change the shape.
Start the sentence in a different place. Change the type of word (verb β noun). Do not just swap words one by one.
The toolbox
| Tool | Original | Paraphrase |
|---|---|---|
| Synonym | The town is very small. | The town is tiny. |
| Opposite + not | The tickets were cheap. | The tickets were not expensive. |
| Word family (change the type of word) | The company decided to close the shop. β The company made a decision to close the shop. Prices rose quickly. β There was a rapid rise in prices. | |
| Phrasal verb | Police discovered the truth. | Police found out the truth. |
| Active β passive | Doctors recommend regular exercise. | Regular exercise is recommended by doctors. |
Careful! Similar is not the same
| Original word | Do NOT use | Why |
|---|---|---|
| stressful | overwhelming | stronger (your boss will know ) |
| young people | teenagers | narrower |
| change | improve | "improve" is always positive |
| say | claim | "claim" suggests you doubt it |
| can help | cures | much stronger |
| most | many | different amount |
All 3 steps together
| Step | Result |
|---|---|
| Original | Many students find it stressful to complete large amounts of homework. |
| 1. Key words | students, homework (keep) |
| 2. Replace | many β a large number of Β· stressful β stressed (word family) Β· complete β finish Β· large amounts of β a great deal of |
| 3. Change the shape | Start with the homework: Finishing a great deal of homework makes a large number of students feel stressed. |
In the exam: the question
Paraphrase: A number of people think that students should not have to pay to go to university.
Paragraph level
Common mistakes
Quick check
- Is the meaning exactly the same?
- Are the numbers, names and dates the same?
- Did the shape of the sentence change?
If any answer is no, fix it.
Practice
Choose the best paraphrase. It must keep the meaning and change the shape of the sentence.
Match each pair with the tool that was used.
Each paraphrase has ONE problem. What is it?
Rewrite each sentence in your own words. Change the shape, keep the meaning and every fact. Then compare with the model.
Model: Getting up early is difficult for lots of people.
Model: To cut congestion, more roads have been built by the government.
Model: Over the last few years, shopping on the internet has grown in popularity.
Model: The chart illustrates the number of passengers who travelled by public transport in one city from 2000 to 2020.
Match each original sentence with its best paraphrase.
Now write
Paraphrase the following fictional text in 40-55 words. Keep its meaning and every fact. Do not copy whole sentences or more than three words in a row. Compare your version with the original before finishing.
Source text, 46 words:
A regular sleep routine helps the body recover after a busy day. Enough sleep can support memory, attention, and clear thinking. People who sleep too little may find daily tasks harder. A quiet bedroom and a steady bedtime can make restful sleep easier. Sleep needs can differ from person to person.
Word bank
Sentence starters
- A good sleep routine ...
- Getting enough sleep may ...
- People who do not sleep enough ...
- It is easier to sleep well when ...
- Everyone needs a different amount of ...