Choose a defining clause for necessary information and a non-defining clause for extra information, then punctuate each correctly.
What is it for?
Learn to add clear, useful details about people and places without writing too many separate sentences.
What you need to know
- Use defining clauses to identify a person, place, or thing.
- Use non-defining clauses to add extra information between commas.
- Choose who, which, that, where, or whose to connect ideas.
- Use whom or a final preposition when the sentence needs it.
- Keep each sentence focused on no more than two main ideas.
1. Use defining clauses to identify someone or something
A defining clause tells readers exactly which person or thing you mean.
Do not use commas around this clause. Choose the linking word that fits the meaning.
- Use who for people.
- Use that or which for things.
- Use where for places.
- Use whose to show possession.
- Do not put commas around defining clauses.
2. Use non-defining clauses for extra information
A non-defining clause adds information about someone or something already identified.
Put a comma before and after the clause when it sits inside a sentence. Use which, who, or whose, not that.
- Use commas to separate extra information.
- Use who for extra details about people.
- Use which for extra details about things.
- Use whose to add information about possession.
- Do not use that in a non-defining clause.
3. Choose the right form with people and prepositions
Sometimes a clause needs a word such as to, with, or for.
In formal writing, a preposition can come before whom. In everyday writing, it often stays at the end.
- Use whom after a preposition in formal writing.
- Use who in many everyday clauses about people.
- Keep a final preposition when it sounds more natural.
- Do not use whom for things.
4. Use which to connect a result or reaction
Which can refer to a whole idea from the previous clause.
Use a comma before which. This helps readers see the result or reaction clearly.
- Put a comma before which.
- Use this pattern to show a result or reaction.
- Do not use that to refer to the whole previous idea.
- Keep the sentence short enough to follow easily.
5. Join ideas without making sentences too long
Relative clauses help you combine related details. First, write the main idea. Then add one useful detail about a person, place, or thing.
Before joining ideas, check that the extra detail belongs to the main idea. Two main ideas are usually enough for one sentence.
- Find two ideas about the same person, place, or thing.
- Choose a linking word that matches the meaning.
- Check whether the detail is necessary or extra.
- Add commas only when the clause gives extra information.
- Split the sentence if readers may lose the main point.
How to do it, step by step
- Name the person, place, or thing you want to describe.
- Choose one related detail that helps readers understand it.
- Decide whether the detail identifies it or simply adds information.
- Choose the correct relative word and add commas if needed.
- Read the sentence again and remove any unnecessary detail.
Formulas and key language
| Use it for | Example | Another example |
|---|---|---|
| person + who + verb | I know a teacher who speaks three languages. | We hired a guide who knows the area. |
| thing + that/which + verb | She bought a phone that takes clear photos. | We use a machine which saves time. |
| place + where + subject + verb | This is the park where we exercise. | I remember the town where my father grew up. |
| person/thing + whose + noun + verb | I met a woman whose son studies abroad. | They rent a house whose windows face south. |
| name, who + extra information, + main verb | Lina, who works nearby, visits us weekly. | My uncle, who enjoys cooking, prepares Sunday lunch. |
| thing, which + extra information, + main verb | The oven, which we bought recently, works well. | The road, which crosses the valley, is narrow. |
| main clause, which + result | The shop was closed, which disappointed the customers. | Our train stopped suddenly, which delayed our arrival. |
| person + preposition + whom | The colleague to whom I wrote replied quickly. | The customer with whom I spoke seemed satisfied. |
| person + who + subject + verb + preposition | The colleague who I wrote to replied quickly. | The customer who I spoke with seemed satisfied. |
Model text
Common mistakes
Plan it, then check it
Plan
- Choose a place and a person connected to it.
- Write the main fact about each one.
- Add details using at least three relative clauses.
- Mark each clause as defining or non-defining.
- Arrange the details so the description feels clear and natural.
Check
- Check that every relative word matches its meaning.
- Check commas around non-defining clauses.
- Check that defining clauses have no extra commas.
- Check that you use which for a whole previous idea.
- Split any sentence that carries too many details.
Practice
Choose the option that completes each sentence correctly.
Write who, which, whose, or where in each gap.
Put the words in order. Add the correct punctuation.
Correct the single mistake in each sentence.
Now write
Write a short article about a place and a person you know. Use made-up details to protect your privacy. Describe the place first, then introduce the person. Include at least three relative clauses. Use defining clauses to identify people or things. Use non-defining clauses to add extra details. Check your commas before finishing. Draft idea: A local community centre has a busy kitchen and a small garden. A volunteer named Elena organises its weekly activities. The centre also offers free classes for local families. Describe how the place works and why Elena matters to the community.
Word bank
Sentence starters
- The place I want to describe is ...
- It is a place where ...
- The person who makes a difference is ...
- One feature that attracts visitors is ...
- The building, which ..., also ...
- What I appreciate most is ...