What is it for?

Learn to add clear, useful details about people and places without writing too many separate sentences.

What you need to know

  • Use defining clauses to identify a person, place, or thing.
  • Use non-defining clauses to add extra information between commas.
  • Choose who, which, that, where, or whose to connect ideas.
  • Use whom or a final preposition when the sentence needs it.
  • Keep each sentence focused on no more than two main ideas.

How to do it, step by step

  1. Name the person, place, or thing you want to describe.
  2. Choose one related detail that helps readers understand it.
  3. Decide whether the detail identifies it or simply adds information.
  4. Choose the correct relative word and add commas if needed.
  5. Read the sentence again and remove any unnecessary detail.

Formulas and key language

UK / US: British and American English both use these relative clauses. In everyday writing, both often allow who or that for people in defining clauses. Formal writing may prefer whom after a preposition.
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Practice

EXERCISE:

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Your task

Write a short article about a place and a person you know. Use made-up details to protect your privacy. Describe the place first, then introduce the person. Include at least three relative clauses. Use defining clauses to identify people or things. Use non-defining clauses to add extra details. Check your commas before finishing. Draft idea: A local community centre has a busy kitchen and a small garden. A volunteer named Elena organises its weekly activities. The centre also offers free classes for local families. Describe how the place works and why Elena matters to the community.

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